You are probably familiar with Edgar Allan Poe's most famous poem The Raven.
I've always been fascinated by that poem, and the unique meter. I've also always been a little depressed by its...depressing message.
So, once upon an evening idle...I decided to emulate Poe's meter, but with a more hopeful message. And therefore with all due courtesy to the inimitable poet Poe, I offer my own creation.
The Lovebird by J.E. Fountain
Once upon a day
break brilliant, when my soul was still resilient,
To the fates
and follies of my life and what it held in store,
That I idled
haply reading, signs and seasons all unheeding,
As the night
was fast receding, came soft knocking on my door.
‘Who will this
be' I wondered, ‘so early knocking on my door?’
Earlier than
I'd known before.
Vaguely through
the mist and motion, of my memory’s stormy ocean,
I recall with
clearer notion how day dawned upon my shore.
For I’d slept
and sweetly slumbered, with my conscience unencumbered
And so many
joys unnumbered, for love of one that I adore.
Radiant beauty,
heaven ordained, mine alone on earth to adore.
I scarce could
e’er hope for more.
When the
silence interrupted, and my solitude corrupted,
By the sound of
slightest knocking that I've mentioned heretofore.
‘Twas the eve
of fair midsummer, I resolve to meet this comer
Ready, steady
like a drummer, they keep knocking on my door.
Leaving me
still to wonder who could be knocking on my door
Or if they’d
come e’er before.
Curious now
with nothing fearing, but some weary soul appearing,
Comes seeking
respite, yes it was this and likely nothing more.
‘Wait' said I, ‘I
am succumbing; you may now desist your drumming
Rest ye now for
I am coming, to fair greet you at my door.
Be at ease,
enter, join me’ said as I opened wide my door
Sunlight there
and nothing more.
Long into the
sunlight squinting, as my mind was gently hinting,
Golden rays
came glancing, glinting, dancing bright upon my floor.
Nothing there,
I was mistaken, blinking dumbly I awaken,
From idle
dreams I’m shaken, and thoughts of one that I adore.
Charming word I
smiled and whispered to the nothing there ‘adore’
Only this and
nothing more.
Turning to my
previous pleasure, tending to resume my leisure,
Once again I
heard the measure of the drumming as before.
What can be
this source of knocking, all my intellect it’s mocking
‘Tis nothing at
all shocking, I simply renew my explore.
If not at my
doorstep, there are other portals to explore
Than those I'd
searched before.
From my window
comes the clatter, I resolve to test the matter,
And at last the
mystery shatter, of what seemed once at my door.
Could it be I
mused and muddled, just a little bit befuddled
Some lost soul
is huddled, at my window and not my door?
I hear ‘tis
most clearly coming from my window not my door
‘Tis but this
and nothing more.
Sitting there a
rapturous songbird, likely all the noise that I heard,
Was his flit
and flutter lighting on my pane and nothing more.
Thinking he
would soon be winging, I’d regret to miss his singing,
And the simple
joy that bringing, but he sat to look me o’er.
Curious that
such a creature would be content to look me o’er
Unlike any
known before.
And for reasons
beyond reason, save perhaps the Orphic season,
I asked the
winged visitor his name, indeed I did implore.
Expecting no
satisfaction, nor any hope of interaction,
I quite reeled
at his reaction, when he stated ‘Evermore.’
Extraordinary
name for bird or beast was this Evermore
Now I must my
wits restore.
Stoic sat he
quite contented as my faculties invented
Some reason for
this visitor and the message that he bore.
Whence to me
comes this chimera, from some long forgotten era,
Or some mystic
high sierra, where such birds are lost in lore?
I recalled a
winged omen in volume of forgotten lore
‘Twas but
legend nothing more.
Still it was so
clearly spoken, could it not be some small token,
From the fates
to guide and show me what my life still held in store?
Or held it no
greater meaning, no cosmic force intervening,
Only
circumstance convening, thoughts upon my mind galore?
Wild and
fanciful illusions racing through my mind galore
Now I pray my
wits restore.
Still he seemed
so true and forthright, speaking plain at dawn’s first fair light,
That I deemed
it would not do to doubt his mission anymore.
Rendered with
such perfect diction, and expressed with pure conviction
I could not
believe it fiction, but some message that he bore.
No doubt
remained it was some prophetic message that he bore
I must ask him
now for more.
Ah to but
divine the meaning, all my consciousness was screening,
To discern the
mystic message that had struck me to my core.
What indeed
could be implicit, by this single word explicit,
Uttered by this
fowl complicit, was the matter to explore.
Fearing all
would evade me if I did not at once explore
Again he spoke ‘Evermore.’
Then, I thought
the air grew lighter, and the day seemed dawning brighter,
As Shekinah
beams descended from the heights where angels soar.
Blessed be this
bird and sender and the message they did render,
Of the love I
held so tender for the one I do adore.
‘Will love
return to me from the only one I do adore?’
Quoth the
songbird, ‘Evermore.’
‘Herald!’ said
I, ‘vow of pleasure, whose one word I'll ever treasure,
Are you sent to
grant love of the only one that I adore?
Messenger of
favor bless me, does the grace of God caress me
For no word will
e’er distress me, only this do I implore
How long can
true love last? I pray thee, again do I implore!’
Quoth the
songbird ‘Evermore.’
‘Herald!’ said
I ‘vow of pleasure, whose one word I'll ever treasure,
For joy without
measure, you have promised this and so much more.
Nothing in you
seems unruly, and I deem you tell it truly,
And you are
appointed duly, to tell of one I adore.
Once more tell
how long shall love endure with the one I adore?’
Quoth the
lovebird ‘Evermore.’
‘Be that word
our sign of greeting, if again our ways find meeting,
Should you e’er
again return to take your rest upon my shore.’
Then he flew
and left no token save the promise he had spoken
That my love
should be unbroken all of time and evermore.
I shall ever
bless the day I first heard him speak Evermore
Only this and
nothing more.
As he flew so
fly the seasons, leaving me no rhymes or reasons,
For his
visitation and the glorious message that he bore.
Save sweet
words to e’er remind me, that true love that once did find me,
Would with
cords forever bind me, to the soul that I adore.
Blessed to
share a joyful life with the true love that I adore.
Love abides
forevermore!
© 2015 Joseph E. Fountain
© 2015 Joseph E. Fountain
Speechless, I am speechless. This is wonderful!
ReplyDeleteI'll have to read it twice....and again....just as I do The Raven.
Poe's poem is one of my favorites and I reviewed it a few weeks ago.
I love the meter and rhymn. I always read it ALOUD...when I a alone...just with the cats! Congratulations on a great literary achievement!
Thanks Nancy.
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